Fractured Fairy Tale
WALT: recraft a traditional fairy tale by changing characters, settings, main events and ideas but still making sure that the bone structure of the fairy tale can be recognised.
The End of the Almighty Giant
Not Long Ago in a small town in New Zealand, there were two very poor men, named Mac and Nook-Nook and all they had were two old keys and an old sticker chart.
One day Mac and Nook-Nook went hunting for free food. On their way to the shop they met a suspicious looking young man. The young man asked the poor men.
"I will give you these magic vortex openers for your two old keys and old stickers chart." He said in a very squeaky voice.
"Yeah Bro. What does it do?" They replied.
"Push the big red button and find out." He said as he faded into the trees. They were fascinated, like it was a trick.
After the young man disappeared, Mac and Nook-nook got mugged from strangers because they hadn't had a shower in years. One man hit the vortex opener out of Mac's hands and pushed the BIG-RED BUTTON, a vortex suddenly opened. KABOOM!! The muggers got scared and ran away like chipmunks.
Mac and Nook-Nook walked into the vortex finding themselves in a dungeon filled with huge giants. One giant was playing the harmonica, one was singing and one was playing the drum, but a huge drum version. They were chanting a type of song that went.
“Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum I can’t smell some smelly bum, pinky-ponky-pinky-poo I can smell my stinky shoes.“
Suddenly one giant shouted. “Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum I can smell someone’s smelly bum! Whoever you are, do you know who you’re dealing with. I’m the ALMIGHTY GIANT!!!” He said in with a growl.
“WOW! He must have a really big nose!” Said Nook-Nook in a loud voice.
“ There they are! Seize the human creatures!! ” Said the almighty giant.
Mac and Nook-Nook run for their lives. They ran through the vortex and return back to town before they get caught and skinned for the giants dinner. They didn’t know how to close the vortex so the giants stepped through into the world of Mac and Nook-Nook.
When the giants saw they had entered New Zealand, land of the small delicious man, their plan was to end the world, for all humans to be extinct. AND so they began their deadly plan.
The giants were destroying the town and turning earth into rubble. The almighty giants were taking over the world and nothing could stop them. Humans were scattered, killed, injured, beaten and eaten. The giants thought they had ended the humans.
In an underground lair, humans, known as Freedom Fighters were making weapons to kill the giants. Nobody paid attention to Mac or Nook-Nook until they stood up and said.
“Attention everybody… we have the one thing that can end this destruction. THIS!!“ As they held up the vortex opener.
“Is that it, a little toy is supposed to save the world. Show us what this vortex opener does.“ Said a Freedom Fighter from amongst the crowd of people.
Mac and Nook-Nook showed everybody what the vortex opener does and told everybody how their plan was going to work. Mac and Nook-Nook were highly sure of their plan but the Freedom Fighters weren't.
While the Giants were eating, Mac, Nook-Nook and some of the Freedom Fighters were ready to ambush the giants. Everyone was ready for battle. Mac and Nook-Nook yelled to the Freedom Fighters. “ CHARGE!!“
The people jumped out ready, steadily holding their weapons in their hands so to kill the giants, but everyone knew they didn’t have a chance to kill all the giants.
Mac and Nook-Nook yelled out.
“FALL BACK, WE’VE GOT A PLAN!!”
The Giants charged the Freedom Fighters but they suddenly stopped when they heard Mac and Nook-Nook call out. Out of nowhere, right before the giants killed them, Mac and Nook-Nook pressed the red button and made the giants drop into a land where no humans lived. Everyone stared with disbelief because the war had finished.
Mac, Nook-Nook and the Freedom Fighters reunited most humans around the world and everything went back to normal, except the big fat mess they had to clean up and that took ages for Mac and Nook-Nook to clean up.
The End
Hi mana wow what an awesome narrative story you did the last paragraphed really hooked me in your narrative story is so satisfying
ReplyDeleteHi mana awsome story bye Jacob
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